I'm just another RPH and I really like Amanda Seyfried. I'm just here to help.
Bluemoon-rpg is but it’s on hiatus until mid-summer. There’s thecity-rp, as well. As for Hollywood, I don’t know any. City roleplays have really died down over the last few months, and there’s barely any left.
Underused faceclaim ⇢ Nathan Stewart-Jarrett
Who: Nathan is an English actor
What: He’s known most for his role as Curtis in the show Misfits.
How old: He was born in 1985, so around 27 years old.
When: He would fit into any type of roleplay, to be honest. Maybe a supernatural or small town roleplay would fit him even more.
Why: People are always complaining about lack of diversity in roleplays, when they have this guy just waiting to be used. Nathan can play almost any role you can give him, and honestly? Look at his face. Look at it. Don’t you want that in your roleplay? You do. So use Nathan, he’s seriously underused and needs more recognition for his work.
Crackships (taking one more request):
That is awesome! I’m so glad someone’s using her, you know?
Url and theme: I have no idea what to expect from the url, and I expect that’s what you were going for. I go onto the page, and notice immediately how plain the theme is. Maybe one of baudelaired’s earlier themes would work better, particularly if you’re a fan of sidebars somewhat like that. The colours aren’t really interesting to me, and it really increases the chances of someone leaving the page sooner. However, your page is very organized, and I must congratulate you on that.
Plot: It’s original, I’ll give you that. I like how you begin the plot, it’s very interesting, and makes me want to read on further. Running away to the circus, huh? I’ve actually never seen a plot with that point, and I really like it. It’s interesting to have that little piece of nostalgia everyone has and make a plot out of it. I would appreciate more elaboration in the plot, but it’s nice. Add a bit more and it’ll be fantastic.
Graphics: I’m not a fan of the sidebar graphic. It’s a nice idea, but you might want to do more editing on it than just adding some text to a gif. The character graphics are nice, but you might want to smooth out the edges on them. They’re a little pointy around the edges where you cropped and pasted. A few bios don’t have the same graphics as the rest, and that should be changed.
Faceclaims: There’s a bit of underused, a bit of overused, but most are right in the middle. A healthy mix! All fit their characters very well, so good on you for that.
Characters: I love how you have a biography of the character, then you get a real feel for them with the interview questions. One thing that concerns me is that some personalities are a tad cliche for the face, and I never like that. The bios are the same size in length, and that’s what I’m looking for. You might want to go through them to check for errors, I found a few tiny ones.
Suggestions: One big thing that I didn’t know where else to put it to have the title link back to the main page or make a link to “home”. It’s difficult to navigate, I find, when I can’t go back. Make all the character graphics look the same, and lengthen the plot, even just a bit.
Overall: This roleplay, despite it’s flaws, is intriguing and fantastic. If you fix it up a bit more, it really will shine and I bet it will end up starting a trend of roleplays like this one. It’s a brilliant idea.
(I don’t have my gifs saved on my phone, so you get: “Amanda says: great!”. I’ll replace this once I get back home on Sunday.)